In this story there is a girl called Connie.She is fifteen and depressed by her mother because her sister has the power at home and mother give more respect and love to her. On the other hand, that can not be a real story because in the story a boy threathened the fifteen years old girl,Connie.
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October 23rd, 2008 · 1 Comment
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jo
// Oct 23, 2008 at 11:25 am
When you are writing try to say something more substantial if possible. Why can it not be a real story- try to prove your ideas.
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